Dimanche 8 juin 14

Adossé sur la plus belle étoile électrique
Soulé au meilleur vin de l’univers
Je me moque gentiment avec elle
De ta petite vie si terre-à-terre
Regarde donc au moins une fois le ciel
Est-ce que tu le trouves magnifique ?

Si tu savais le temps que ça m’a pris
De convaincre toutes ces lumières
De s’unir toutes ensemble au-dessus de toi
Pour qu’elles puissent, peu fières,
Te faire lever la tête, te montrer moi
Prêt à t’expliquer pourquoi je ne suis plus ici

Si tu savais ô combien je regrette cette nuit
Celle où j’ai levé le pied, foutu ma vie en l’air,
Il suffit tellement d’un rien pour décrocher
Je pensais avoir vu trop de fois Lucifer
Mais depuis que je suis tombé là-haut

Ne plus t’embrasser est un enfer.

Par DiaryAdventures le Lundi 9 juin 14
Très joli texte. Très poétique avec une fin que l'on ressent un peu plus dure mais qui rajoute justement un brin poétique contratstant avec ce que j'ai personnellement ressenti comme de l'espoir et une sincérité au debut.
Je ne comprends juste pas "te monter moi" mais sinon une fois de plus tu nous livres ici quelqie chose d'autenthique et d'agreable.
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J'aime les 4 premiers vers (verres ;P) que je trouve habiles et "justes". Ensuite c'est bien, ça colle, ça me touche moins mais néanmoins j'aime :D
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C'est parce que j'avais oublié le "R": c'est montRer moi !
Merci pour ton commentaire Diari.
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Oui je suis encore plus hasardeux quand il s'agit d'écrire un poème...
Merci pour ton commentaire p'tite louve.
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J'adore ce qu'il se dégage de tes textes, c'est simple, c'est poétique, ça me rend toute joyeuse et mélancolique. Tu es talentueux, j'espère que tu le sais ;)
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